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Posted by Rico On 18.49 8 komentar


My favorite movie

My favorite movie is The Chronicles of Narnia. I like that movie because have good performance, good story and the computer effect like real. Until now, Narnia have two story. The first story is “The lion, the witch, and the wardrobe” and the second is “Prince Caspian”. When I saw this movie I feel this story have equality with Lord of the ring. But after I saw the second story I feel so pride because all player can playing that story with good.

On this story Peter, Edmund, Susan, and Lucy have a good performance. Peter is one of the player which have played many movie and have experienced in that movie. And in this movie peter become the hero. About Edmund, Susan, and Lucy is new player but because this movie they become player which have a good enough quality. They can make all people which look on the the film very proud. More than anything else at the second episode they get a new friend which make appearance of them seen fantastic. I think on the second story they can enhancing sorrow nuance don’t like the first episode.

Computer effect on this story like real for example there is a tree which can move,and there is a human with horse foot. And presented view also use computer effect. And the last I agree if this movie becoming one of the best movie nomination.


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8 Response for the "Improvement"

  1. Karina says:
    8 Juli 2009 pukul 22.39

    hi...rico,,

    i think your story is good enough,,and there are some mistake on your grammar and vocab,,but that's ok,,just keep learn and learn

    but your story is not tottaly focusing on the story,,better if you focusing just on the story,,,

    give me a comment too...
    karina 120810476G

  2. Rulyana says:
    11 Juli 2009 pukul 06.03

    Great movie..

    Rico, U've described n explained bout ur argumentation is clear..

    But there are still many mistakes on grammmar, vocabs, and tenses..

    U can check it later n do better next time..

    that's all...

  3. nadhira says:
    11 Juli 2009 pukul 19.54

    i think your writing is good enough but i found ittle mistake like sentence "Narnia have two story" it should be " narnia have two sekuel".

    and you not focus about what you like and dislike.

  4. Kurnia Suci says:
    12 Juli 2009 pukul 01.52

    hy rico

    I think your paragraph is good enough
    But i found some mistakes on your grammar
    please check it

    And you should be focus on your writing
    I think that enough and so far so good

    kurnia suci (120810488G)

  5. Pratiwi Ramandita says:
    12 Juli 2009 pukul 02.15

    hi rico..

    I think your paragraph is quiet good..
    the story is very interesting and you can describe it detail, so make the person who read your paragraph feel interesting with the movie and have some opinion with u..

    thanks for give me comment.

    Pratiwi ramandita 120810487G

  6. aisyah says:
    12 Juli 2009 pukul 03.24

    I think your paragraph is good enough

    But i found some mistakes on your grammar
    and you must focus what you like or dislike

    thanks for give me comment.

  7. Febrina a.k.a Berroy says:
    12 Juli 2009 pukul 04.39

    hi rico ..
    i interest with your paragraph ..
    you describe this movie clearly ..
    but i found some mistake in your paragraph , like "I think on the second story they can enhancing sorrow nuance don’t like the first episode" you should write "I think on the second story they can enhancing sorrow nuance didn't like the first episode.

    that's all ..

    120810489G ..

  8. cHuBbY_LuChUu says:
    12 Juli 2009 pukul 05.05

    your writing is focus,.

    and your writing is enough,.

    elok 120810486G

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